Tuesday, January 18, 2011

What is cooperation and why is it important?

Cooperation is when two  or more people work toeghter when they do somthing. for example when Gaby and Jose do a project together for a class....American government to be exact.  They show great cooperation because they can talk to each other and know they can produce a great project. If we do not cooperate with each each other we would make the world off balance and would not know what is going on. Cooperation is define as an act or instance of working or acting together for a common purpose or benefit; joint action., which means that we must all be on the same page to work togehter as one person.

3 comments:

  1. '....' careful when you use ellipses. They usually show that you’ve omitted words. For example, if you're quoting someone and you want to shorten the quote, you use ellipses to indicate where you've dropped words or sentences.
    'would not know what is going on.' sounds kind of awkward

    '.,' no use of period behind 'joint action'

    Overall, good post. Could be longer though, but the meaning is there. For the most part, this is well wriiten.

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  2. You need to edit this a bit. it seems a bit rushed. like you were just trying to come up with a way to make it longer.

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  3. it seems like you were typing just for the fun of it and putting in various words. go back and reread and you'll see your mistakes. you're ideas are good. just elaborate on them

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